Mia's Five fan fiction links

Alice in Wonderland: Abigale and Frankie in Wonderland

"After Alice had her adventures did anyone else find this rabbit hole? Was it all just a dream Alice had? Well then Abigale and Frankie two best friends had a somewhat similar dream! They are a bit odd and Frankie fits right in Wonderland where as Alice tends to be a bit confused at times. Many well known characters and a few things from the book as well make their adventure grand."

Simple and not terribly well written but an interesting idea all the same. It ended rather abruptly and did not go into much depth so there isn't a lot to reflect on. The idea of having voices in your head (devil vs angel) is rather over-done and not very exciting. I had no interest in reading anymore, even if there had been more to read.

The Matrix: Asylum 

"They're not Neo and Smith. They're Thomas and John. And they are insane. They've spent 5 years in an asylum, together in their white room. Trying to remember what happened to them. Putting it all together. Did it all really happen?"

Neo and Smith have been confined to a white room and straitjackets - everything they knew is now wiped from their memory. Or so the doctors and nurses think. The knowledge of their past still lingers in the back on their minds. Somethings are just instinctual and they can't forget.

I actually found this fan fiction blog quite interesting. I only read the first chapter but I plan to sit down and read the rest in my spare time. It was decently written, nothing amazing, but I suppose people who are writing fan fiction are not planning to be New York bestselling authors. I really enjoyed the Matrix trilogy (despite the movies got worse with each edition) - the concept was something I found really interesting. This fan fiction blog was also an creative take on what could have happened afterward.

Harry Potter: Seeking Severus Snape: Curfew

"She immediately recognised the voice as belonging to Snape. She didn't know whether to feel terrified or excited. She felt her arms being released as he brought his hand round to turn her face towards him. She caught the feral hunger in his eyes as he brought his mouth down to devour hers, his tongue invading her mouth possessively. He took hold of her bottom lip between his teeth and bit down slightly, before releasing it.

She had all the while been clenching her hands at her sides, toying with the idea of stroking him. After that kiss, she could no longer restrain herself, and reached behind her to grasp his hardened length, now desperately straining against his trousers. She heard him hiss as she stroked him, causing him to reach down into her bottoms and plunge two fingers deep into her. She cried out and arched into him, throwing her head back onto his shoulder."

I'm not sure how I feel about Harry Potter related erotic literature - it's a bit wrong seeing as I grew up with Harry Potter and all. But then again, it is an interesting take on the character of Snape and now at an age where I can appreciate the erotic tones brings it back in a new light. The writing itself is not that bad. Definitely a newbie at writing erotic literature, but it can be hard not to be clumsy when it comes to writing about sex. I didn't have time to read all nine chapters of 'Curfew' but the author did try and bring more a plot into it instead of just following the same storyline the first two chapters took. 

Inception: Break Down

"She bit her lip as he left the room. There was something she couldn't quite put her finger on. He seemed polite, and gentle...but the way he behaved at the meal - not speaking, simply swallowing his food as tough ravenous with hunger- indicated there was something wrong.
She paused. She didn't want to be impolite, but nor did she want to stay.

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Arthur blinked. She knew something was wrong. He'd seen it in her eyes. He swallowed, and reached for the faucet to fill the water jug.
Suddenly, his hand twitched. "Oh, God," he muttered.
Hastily turning the tap off, he turned and fled the room."

This was a really well written piece and it ended just as it got good! A little disappointed in that seeing as I was quite interested in seeing where this was going. I do love the movie Inception, not only for the complex storyline, but the enthralling, complicated characters as well so I was keen to read about what this author had planned for these characters. Unfortunately, it ended abruptly, as I mentioned, and we were left wondering. 

Beauty and the Beast: Rose and Me

"I knew Rose my whole life; she was my best friend, her mother (my nanny) would joke that we may as well have been twins. We would spend all our time together her older brother Mark would join us but more often than not we would be allowed to roam free in the grounds of my home. We would play in far off imagery worlds. I would be a knight, a space cowboy or all-mighty wizard; she would be my princess, my showgirl or my witch counterpart. In the winter mouths when her mother forbade us from going out in the cruel cold for too long, we would sit in a warm room; Rose would write our summer adventures into her growing books of tales, while I would draw pictures to add very little to the tales she told, my pictures would be added in clumsy to her magic book. But like everyone else my childhood bliss had to end and my came much more abruptly than the average."

My favourite Disney story was Beauty and the Beast, which was why I was drawn to this story. It started off well written but slowly deteriorated. The author brought the characters into the 21st century, but didn't state it clearly in the beginning which made it slightly confusing when talk of the internet and e-mail came up. Only three chapters were written but I f wasn't particularly sad when they came to an end. The flow of the story wasn't quite right; everything, such as conversations, moved unrealistically quickly which made it lack believability. I do realise with fan fiction it is more writing for yourself than for the pleasure of others, or writing at a high level of talent, but this story could have been improved if the author had gone back and reread, edited and double checked what she had written.