Fanfic Link One
“Pricked by a Thorn Prince”
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8349774/1/Pricked_By_A_Thorned_Prince
“Hermione smiled, in spite of herself, but continued to walk away, while Malfoy watched her retreating figure, his own smile gradually fading”
This fanfic explores the possibility of a love affair between Draco Malfoy, a high school nemesis of Harry Potter, and a pureblood Hogwarts student , And Hermione Granger one of Harry Potter’s Best friends, a muggleblood bookworm. What make’s this so appealing is the fact that it’s a forbidden love type scenario, and there’s no better love story,than that of a "forbidden love story". It play’s with the whole good vs bad relationship between the character’s, Malfoy constantly picking on Hermione because she’s a muggle born wizard and hermione struggling to tolerate with it .What I thought made this fanfic alluring was the fact that the author didn’t begin the story with the love affair immediately, and rather gave the audience a glimpse of the relationship that already exists between the characters in the book. It lead’s up to the love affair, rather than starting straight off with a bang, and slowly sizzling out, till your bored with the ultimate undying love spiels. I found it well written and easy to follow, because the text was organized clearly, without the strange dialogue structures some of these fanfic writers create. I personally believe that it would be extremely attractive to the female audience of the Harry Potter books firstly because Draco has the ultimate bad boy appeal, with the devilishly good look’s and smug attitude, and Hermione is the cutesy goody two shoe’s that can’t seem to catch a break. I seem to find more of the romance fanfic’s quite alluring, so for a first read, I’m extremely impressed and actually considering reading the second chapter.
Fanfic Link Two:
Lutties Hear
thttp://www.fanfiction.net/s/7789422/2/LuttieS_Heart
His hands shook on the knob; water from the rain outside—she had not known it was raining till then, snug inside her tree as she was—plastered his shock-white hair to his equally pale forehead, tangling into his eyes.
One of those eyes stared at her balefully, a washed-out blue amidst all that white, as he shut the door behind him.
Luttie half stood—"I have been exiled," the Hatter said—and she sat back down again, face as pale as her unexpected guest's.
This fanfic was called Luttie’s heart, revolving around Luttie and the Mad Hatter. I found it impeacably well written, and punctuation was spot on, something that I do not pride myself in. The flow and the tone of this fanfic also made it extremely easy to follow and get into. I couldn’t help thinking to myself about how much this fanfic seemed like a published piece of litreature already. Irregardless of my ramblings if you are an Alice in Wonderland fan (movie or book) this is a great read.
The first chapter I read was great, it involved a The Mad Hatter, and a character called Luttie. I’m not sure weather she made an apperance within the movie. I’m under the impression that she’s a made up character, purely for this fanfic, if anybody could clear this up for me, it would be greatly appreciated. The Mad Hatter, has been exiled by the ‘Red Queen’ from the underworld, and has turned to this Luttie character to show him how to leave the underworld, and enter the real world. I’ve only read the first chapter, but was instantly aware of all of the directions, and possiblities that the author could go write about.
The writer of this piece of fanfic encapsulated the character of the Mad Hatter perfectly (talking about the recent movie version). I found that he/she mixed both his exhuburance, and insanity with the pure brilliance and intellegence that he somehow unconciously holds. The character of Luttie is both mysterious and likeable, which makes this story so much easier to read. The possiblity of Luttie’s character being quite an intresting twist to the Alice story is alluring, and the fact that she hold’s a somewhat magic to her make’s you want to keep reading. This fanfic made me reconsider my draft a lot more, and possibly delve more into an alice in wonderland type fanfic, as I have fallen in love with the Mad Hatter’s character again.
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