The battle
over little whinging had been a problematic one and as the casualties rose,
Arthur and his wife Molly reflected on the progress of the battle. It
took the lives of several of the order members and some had been mutilated as
in the case of George Wesley. Molly is unhappy and is having second
thoughts about being committed to the battle whereas Arthur is optimistic about
the chances of overall victory. In the end, they kiss and make up to
continue the fight another day. Personally, I did not like this fan
fiction as it’s difficult to understand where the story is headed. It has
weird character names which are neither imaginative nor amusing. Though
at the start it’s confusing at the end it has a cliché ending all of which are
reasons for a negative personal review.
A dream gone wrong, a nightmare or reality it’s hard to tell in this
story. Hermoine seems to be dreaming in this story and in the end gives
the impression that it is not just a nightmare but real events. She has
lost her eyesight and is in the awkward position of being blind and having to
make a serious decision. The story flips back and forth from childhood
instances to the recent when she is mature. In the end she chooses
someone to heal her to help her get her eyesight and nominates Draco to look
for DNA which is vital for her eyesight. Personally, I thought this story
was more interesting and had more suspense. It keeps the reader guessing
and that’s one of the positive aspects of the story and it also has an
interesting flow to the storyline.
This short fan-fiction is
based on the first book of harry potter. A young boy named Taylor is starting
the school of Hogwarts for the first time. After greeting his family goodbye
and catching the train at platform 9 and ¾ he meets and makes friends with
Harry Potter, Hermione and Ron Wesley. I thought this was a short and very
simple fan fiction, I particularly enjoyed it as it reminded me of the first
harry potter movie which I haven’t seen in so many years. Overall it’s a good
story to read.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6804573/2/Harry_Goes_to_Africa
This was rather one of the
more interesting fan-fictions I have read thus far, it was very simple to read
and imaginative I’d say. Basically the story is about harry potter who wanted a
break from Britain due to the fact that he was sought after by the evil who
were always out to try and kill him. After making friends with a captain he
sails out to Africa for some fun adventure.
Such a nicely constructed story about a girl named Luna who happens to be in
love with Harry potter, however Harry loves Luna’s best friend Ginny. Luna
spends Valentine’s Day at Harry’s house and after cooking and eating they kiss
and make out. Luna ends up sleeping with Harry the night and in the morning
Harry wakes up sober saying that it was all a mistake and that he was too
drunk. Therefore that’s where the tittle of this story comes into effect;
“life’s a bitch”





I love how you are focusing your links on Harry potter..don't underestimate the power of Harry potter haha..keep it up! You're doing great! :)
ReplyDeleteDulaaaa (: Harry Potter is awesome, I love how you're running your concepts on Harry Potter. I'm guessing your fan-fiction is going to be based on it huh? (:
ReplyDeleteYes, yes i know this is a Cliche topic but yea my Fan Fiction is about Harry Potter
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