Tuesday, 24 July 2012

Mata's Fan fiction draft



Idea of how the story should go
Crossover of Mortal Instruments and Infernal Devices

Beginning: .Alec Lightwood sets out to find the truth behind William Herondale. Magnus is being secretive about it, which sparks Alec's curiosity.

Middle: Someone dies.

End: Should have a twist, but I'm not too sure about that. I'll have to get my creative juices flowing

 I'm doing a crossover of Mortal Instruments with Infernal Devices, but focusing more on the characters in the background, not that they don't play a big role in the books. I just thought it'd be good to have a story that's focusing solely on them. I want them to get more spotlight than those who are the main characters.

Possible Story (1)
Authors point of view

In the name of the Lord
The reign of King George II
In the year seventeen hundred and fifty-five the sixteenth day of the third month
I write this to you
My dear Magnus

Do you remember when you said this was nonsense?
I find it brings me humor when your agitation has taken the best of you. However, let me say this to you, I know there is some sense in nonsense if you wish to look for it. It's as simple as that.
Must you disappear, I will find you and you will regret the day you rejected my love.

Yours faithfully
 Will Herondale

What the hell was that supposed to mean? Alec thought to himself, who is this William Herondale? How close was he to Magnus? Why has he kept this letter for so long? Alec couldn't help but pace back and forth in Magnus' sleeping quarters, fretting over a letter he thought should not concern him at all.

"Damn it Magnus,why do you still have this?" he said as his hand hit the wall with a thud.

"Did somebody call for me?" the spiky haired downworlder chirped as he started towards his master.

 "I knew I could smell you once-" Magnus held himself back, his eyes trailed down to where Alec held the once private letter sent to him by none other than.

."William Herondale? Is he...Is he an aquaintance? Former lover or master? Or some guy you shared intimate letters with?"

 "Alexander, calm down I didn't even know I still had that lying around. Just hand it over and I'll deal with it" Alec scoffed rolling his eyes,

 "Oh yeah, that's why it was in your top drawer right? In the front pocket of your diary?" he couldn't help it, his lies were doing his head in and the last thing he needed was Magnus to be secretive about it.

 "Alexander, just hand it over. This doesn't concern you, nor will it ever, now just give it to me" he sighed angrily inching his way over to Alec.

 "Not until you tell me what he meant I wa-"

"DAMN IT ALEXANDER! WHY ARE YOU SO DAMN STUBBORN?!"

Magnus huffed as he snatched the letter out of his hands,

"Why can't you ever do anything I ask of you huh? Do you find it amusing? Or are you simply bored with your own life, that you decided to make mine the center of yours?"

Tears filled up to the rim, but due to his pride he blinked them away. He knew it, he knew his heart could not take it anymore. He had, had enough.

"Forgive me if I have crossed the line between master and protector. I will not pry into your private life nor will you in mine." With a throbbing chest and an aching heart, he marched himself out.

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Magnus' Point of view

It was dangerous. What would my purpose of being a warlock and protector be if the master died? How was it he found the letter? if what "he" said was true...Would that mean he was the one? No! I can't possibly do that to him, this was nonsense. His words were haunting, does he not realise how much pain I've gone through trying to escape his grasp? And to think his bloodline has entered this household, have they found out? I shook my head hoping the floating worries would fly out leaving me in peace. But I guess not all things go the way you want them to. I sighed putting the letter away in another place hoping the master of the house wont find.

"He doesn't know does he?" the voice was familiar, I didn't have to turn around to see who it was.

"I've always wondered why I decided to make you immortal, it still puzzles me to this day Mr Gabriel Lightwood" my rudeness did not concern me nor him.

"Now, now Mr Bane did I not swear an oath to you? Did I not tell you I will help bring him down no matter what the consequences?"

"Calm down, nobody is bringing anyone down. Don't you think enough people have suffered due to this nonsense?"

I knew perfectly well, some one had to die. Blood is what he wanted to see, but there was no way in hell I was letting that happen.

"You know what we must do? Do you not?"

"Even if we do that, it will not-"

"You stupid Nephilim. Just do what you're told and leave him to me."


14 comments:

  1. I can't wait for this story to be finished and polish girl! This sounds awesome! Keep it up! :)

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    1. Ale, thanks for the comment I'll try my best to get you hooked into it bro (:

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  2. Very interesting start. Kept me hooked. What's this fan fiction based on? Keep it up!

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    1. Hahahahaah thanks Dox-man. It's based on Cassandra Clares Infernal Devices and Mortal Instruments. It's a pretty good read y'know what I mean ? (:

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  5. Thanks for clearing that up for me Mata! I will do a bit of research on it. Looking forward to your story!

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    1. All goods Dox-man, I'm hoping I can get you (the audience) hooked until the very end. But it'll totally depend on my mood (:

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  6. this looks like it's going to be really interesting, I liked how you begun with a letter to introduce us into the story, good stuff excited to read the rest.

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    1. I hope it will be interesting, I don't know where my story will lead me, so I'm excited as well to see where this is headed. Thanks for the feedback (:

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  8. This is going so great amiga! I am really excited to see the final work, you have done really good today and you got me hooked! please finish it? hahaha..loved it! :)

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    2. Really ? Have I really grabbed your attention ? Or is it one of those 'skip through ones' until it gets to the good parts ? I just wanna know so I can try improve on it, y'know what I mean ? Haha (;

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