mohamed 5 fanfiction link

nighmare

This short story of fan fiction hilariously well presents typical characters of south park as shown on television the story is about how many stupid things they have done and how they upset  many people, but at the end they realize that everything they have done was wrong. I was excited up to the finish the readying of the story. I like how the written substance and components have made the story very enjoyable to read.

in the dark 

The story started with great emphasis of as the story went on with best setting of flash light back to back.
I was intrigued with the substance provided which has in turn enhanced my willingness and perhaps motivated me to read even more. In saying that, however it turns out that when i completed reading the story half way  the overall scheme and substance of the readings have dropped in value hence declining my motivatin to continue readin as i have found it to be boring. I also note that I have found myself completing the readings without really understanding the overall meaning of the story and i guess what i am trying to emphasis is that the punch lines where rather leaning towards the weaker side.

revelations

This piece of fan fiction is based on TV program. i like the way author written it in script form. its about a mysterious apparition is trying to kill a young small ville and its up Chlark the hero to save her. the main character was to make it look like the ability to make it such action TV program, the focuses of the program is that Chlark is hero and hes looking after small ville from the evil and hes here too save the ones that he loved. enjoyed reading this fan fiction because its pretty straight forward

The battlefield

This story about the 300 spartes fighting for there freedom against purja. The king of purja whom name was zerkseer sew the lend of sparte and want for him " I will have sparta country" king zerkseer says " but first i will need to get rid of sparta person!" zerkseers sent am man on horse to tell sparte king they were evicted.
Sparte king trained 300 man marched to hot gate to fight for their country.

Ben 10

This fan fiction is TV series boy called Ben 10 who acquires a watch-like alien devices called the omnitrix attached to his wrist that allows him to turn into alien creatures. reading this book i realize that was easy to follow and though the storyline was basic. Personally, i though the story was understandable.Perhaps if the words  were long and imaginative words would find it boring. just reading this story you can pick up all the point which is good. it could do with creativity but as its for kids its good to keep similar and plain for users to their understandability.