Noah's Fan Fiction Draft

I’m writing my story on Edward Scissor hand’s a character created by Tim burton and played by Johnny Deep. Here’s a little background on the character if you’ve never seen the movie. He was created by a mad/genius scientist who died before finishing Edward leaving him with scissor’s for hand’s. He lives’ in a mansion on top of a hill overlooking an extremely mundane suburbia, He eventually venture’s out, fall’s In love and becomes exploited by the people that reside there because of his impeccable cutting skills and kind heart. He fall's in love with one of the girl's that lives there but is driven back into his castle, by an angry mob. It's tragic because there is no happy ending.Hope you enjoy , and my story picks up from where the movie ends! (ALSO a cross-over with alice in wonderland slightly...)

Edward slowly walked out of the forest, out of the darkness. He walked out into the light, leaving the cold shadowy landscape behind him, leaving a past of horror, of loneliness, he no longer wanted to be Edward Scissor hand’s the abomination, the mutant. He wanted to be normal, he wanted to be able to hold something in his hands, without destroying it, without hurting it.

His first step, made a slight crunch sound, crispy grass covered in frost, stuck out beneath his black boots. It was daytime where ever he was, and the sun shone brightly over a large green meadow. His eye's needed to adjust.

He saw a river, slightly to the left, crystal clear, sparkling he imagined it would be like swimming through diamonds, only if he could swim of course.
He headed towards that direction, large clumsy step's he had been walking for day's and the closer he got to the river, the more he realized his thirst. Yet the river never seemed closer, it actually felt as it was moving further and further away.

"You there!....dont take one more step!"
Edward heard it faintly, like the sound of chime's  gently playing in the background.
He imagined it would be what an angel sounded like.
"Hey Stupid!, dont take one more step, or there's no returning"
Edward, fought himself from the thirst, just enough to turn around and face his insulter.
She was small, not small dainty, yet she had the persona of a warrior, she was the colour of white lily's, with hair the gleaming like spun gold. She wore a blue dress, frayed slightly at her ankles, covered in mud, and giving way to her feet, no shoe's. She had a tiny face, fairy like, with large forget me not eye's the colour of a blue abyss, and full red lip's the colour of an apple. Ironically she seemed like the biggest contradiciton, so pretty yet so feirce. Edward could not take his eye's of her.
This seemed to make her slightly uncomfterble, yet she did'nt gasp, or run away, she didnt scream at the sight of him, or shudder. She just looked at him, as if she was trying to see someone within him. "You look soooo fimilar" she said. Edward's heart begun to race once again, the sound of her voice, the strength in her eye's......
"Can you hear me?... you look so fimilar, did you know that you were about to go on the quest of no return?"
Edward still entranced managed to mumble "what...?"
"The quest of no return, that river is enchanted, you  head in that direction, you'll never find it, you'll just keep walking and walking til eventually the thirst kills you"
Edward watched as she slowly pulled a little bottle out of the satchel she had around her shoulder, take this she said. She than noticed his hand's.

"Ohmy, those must get in the way"
Edward shyly smiled. She than pulled the tiny silver cap of the bottle and held it to edwards lips, he parted them eargly, and almost instiantanously the thirst left, and was replaced with a warm feeling, that tingled throughout his body.

come with me, I have someone i think you'll like to meet. He's Mad, but you'll see.